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	<title>Comments on: Amanda’s Randoms: The &#8216;What If&#8217; Way of Finding Your Story</title>
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		<title>By: the5randoms</title>
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		<description>Alana,

Elizabeth George, in her book Write Away, addresses this issue. On p. 57, she discusses having a running plot outline that has her block out her scenes, sort of like the notes of a screenplay. During this outline, she decides: &quot;Will I start in the midst of an action and then back off and tell how we got there? Will I start with a line of dialogue and then back off and set the scene? Will I set the scene and then begin the action? Will I be in someone&#039;s mind?&quot;

I highly,  HIGHLY recommend the book if you find yourself with some spare change, some spare time, and some spare gas to get you down to the bookstore. :o)

-Susan</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alana,</p>
<p>Elizabeth George, in her book Write Away, addresses this issue. On p. 57, she discusses having a running plot outline that has her block out her scenes, sort of like the notes of a screenplay. During this outline, she decides: &#8220;Will I start in the midst of an action and then back off and tell how we got there? Will I start with a line of dialogue and then back off and set the scene? Will I set the scene and then begin the action? Will I be in someone&#8217;s mind?&#8221;</p>
<p>I highly,  HIGHLY recommend the book if you find yourself with some spare change, some spare time, and some spare gas to get you down to the bookstore. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_surprised.gif' alt=':o' class='wp-smiley' /> )</p>
<p>-Susan</p>
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		<title>By: Alana Abbott</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alana Abbott</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 May 2008 21:50:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice what-ifs. :) I&#039;m looking forward to learning more about &lt;i&gt;Devoured.&lt;/i&gt;

In the current WiP, my real question has been, &quot;What if I&#039;m starting at the wrong place in the story?&quot; And instead of helping, it&#039;s being something of a stumbling block. I&#039;m thinking of starting over in a different place and seeing what happens.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice what-ifs. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  I&#8217;m looking forward to learning more about <i>Devoured.</i></p>
<p>In the current WiP, my real question has been, &#8220;What if I&#8217;m starting at the wrong place in the story?&#8221; And instead of helping, it&#8217;s being something of a stumbling block. I&#8217;m thinking of starting over in a different place and seeing what happens.</p>
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		<title>By: the5randoms</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 15 May 2008 02:48:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Amanda,

I loved &quot;looking behind the curtain&quot; at your process! My what if&#039;s are never so concrete. I sort of have a vague idea, and then I have to write, re-write, get back editor&#039;s notes, and THEN I discover the what if&#039;s dominoing off my original what if. Uh, am I making sense? It&#039;s late here. ;o)

-Susan</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Amanda,</p>
<p>I loved &#8220;looking behind the curtain&#8221; at your process! My what if&#8217;s are never so concrete. I sort of have a vague idea, and then I have to write, re-write, get back editor&#8217;s notes, and THEN I discover the what if&#8217;s dominoing off my original what if. Uh, am I making sense? It&#8217;s late here. ;o)</p>
<p>-Susan</p>
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